Corey, The lines of rhythm here are good and a few of these have some really dynamic silhouettes. Please don't short shrift the hands, feet and faces. They help give the subject identity and a sense of individuality. Also, be more conscious of where and why you place darker lines. Think of the shadow side of the subject and where weight shift is emphasized.
Some proportions look a bit off, good poses, but maybe you can push them a bit more
ReplyDeleteCorey,
ReplyDeleteThe lines of rhythm here are good and a few of these have some really dynamic silhouettes. Please don't short shrift the hands, feet and faces. They help give the subject identity and a sense of individuality.
Also, be more conscious of where and why you place darker lines. Think of the shadow side of the subject and where weight shift is emphasized.