Corey, You have created some good gestures here. I would avoid an even handed contour going over your gestures. That's clean-up drawing. I'm looking for loose, but developed, gesture drawings. I don't mind that you go over the non-photo blue pencil drawings with a tighter line, just keep things, loose, overall. The poses and weight shift are good. Lastly, try incorporating the surrounding a little more. With more finished drawings, the surroundings will help provide some context.
Corey,
ReplyDeleteYou have created some good gestures here. I would avoid an even handed contour going over your gestures. That's clean-up drawing. I'm looking for loose, but developed, gesture drawings. I don't mind that you go over the non-photo blue pencil drawings with a tighter line, just keep things, loose, overall. The poses and weight shift are good.
Lastly, try incorporating the surrounding a little more. With more finished drawings, the surroundings will help provide some context.