Corey, There's a pretty good variety of poses here. Try to look for a more turned form in the subject. Look to make more elegant lines in your work. All the lines have a short, rough consistency. This is a skill that you will develop by concentrating and consciously laying down a more accurate confident line that describes the form. Look to the last drawing. The pose is decent but the line from the right wrist to the elbow and around to the upper arm is too clumsy. It makes the overall form too blocky. Be deliberate in how these lines get placed.
Corey,
ReplyDeleteThere's a pretty good variety of poses here. Try to look for a more turned form in the subject. Look to make more elegant lines in your work. All the lines have a short, rough consistency. This is a skill that you will develop by concentrating and consciously laying down a more accurate confident line that describes the form. Look to the last drawing. The pose is decent but the line from the right wrist to the elbow and around to the upper arm is too clumsy. It makes the overall form too blocky. Be deliberate in how these lines get placed.